Saturday, July 7, 2007

...Today i waited for you till dawn...



...As the rays of sun filtered through my curtains...
....Your thoughts gently touch my eyes and ....
.... I wake up with smile on my face...
...I danced like a bird with the wings stretched across the sky...
.. I threw blossoming flower all around...
.....I filled the whole house with fragrance...
...Today i waited impatiently for you till dawn...


... I leaned out of the window thousand of time...
.. I screamed out at every single ring of phone..
... I turned the watch upside down...!!!
....I just ran on toes at knock at my door..!!!
today i waited impatiently for you till dawn...


... I was lost in your thought all the day..!!!
I just sat smiled at all dull days...!!!
... I just sat and cried at all beautiful days..!!!
... I touched you endlessly to my heart..!!
today i waited impatiently for you till dawn...


I sat at my window for the whole day...!!!
I saw sun setting & dawn coming...!!!...
I saw flower shedding & fragrance loosing..
I saw the darkness engulfing my wings..!!!
...But still i waited impatiently for you till dawn...

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Thats really awesome....

Anonymous said...

amazing and awesome...


.......genius

ABhit: the alter ego or the ego altered... said...

well! well!!
one can feel the melancholy, the leitmotif in all of ur creations...
coz the song remains the same...

the longing, the pain is clearly palpable...aur log mujhse kehte hain ki socha mat kar.. ;))

but i must accept the poem is really beautiful..n the beauty lies in the vivid feel u gave to it by incorporating the day to day trivias...!!!!

lovely!!!

ABhit: the alter ego or the ego altered... said...

"Did you ever say yes to a pleasure?
Oh my friends, then you also said yes to all pain.
All things are linked, entwined, in love with one another."
"What does not kill me, makes me stronger."